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I couldn't not read this after reading the description! And damn, I wasn't disappointed.

I really can't wait for the next chapter, this sounds so interesting! :)

Thanks! I'm glad I could lure you in to my trap ;D

I'm totally loving this! I can't wait for the next update! =D

hmmm this is an interesting concept. cant wait to read more(:

yeah, this is really awesome! can't wait for another update!

I'm glad you like it! More is up!

Okay, I'm just in love with you and your writing. In. Love.

Thanks XD you flatter me!

Welcome. You make me go 'asdfljgkldhgfowuaehfjlksdjfa' every time you update :3

Oh man that was so good. the description, everything...I really like your writing. can't wait for more :)

Wow, this sounds like it's going to turn out amazing.
I loved your last story and I bet I'm gonna love this one too.
Can't wait for an update :D

I hope it doesn't disappoint! Thanks for reading!

This is going to be another long comment and I hope you'll forgive me :]

Oh man. I didn't even read the description, I kinda just squeed because "omg a new story from you". I. Already. Fucking. Love. This.

Whatever the fuck it was, it meant one thing to Frank, and one thing only. He finally had enough for a dog.
You want to kill me? Because I couldn't stop laughing for good five minutes.

And oh my god. A slavery fic. That's so amazing. Your depressed Gerard was fantastic but I want THIS one! Like, I'd totally pay for him and I don't care what it says about me, I completely fell in love with him. Your slave Gerard is more than awesome. I don't even know how to express it shdjfhdj :D

“Please don’t,” the slave whimpered. “Please don’t.”
The thing is, my imagination is pretty good and I can totally see this whole scene and that's. Too. Much. I'm sure I have already said this when I commented on your last story but you are so good at dialogues and stuff like that! I'll quote you till the end of my life, ok?

And the last thing! IT whimpered, IT stared, IT showed...
I love you for this forever, okay?

I think it's pretty obvious that I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Thanks so much! I hoped I didn't paint this Gerard as too wimpy, but I think it'll show more in the next chapter that he is a little firey, too ;D I think you'll like it!

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I love this! Frank and Gerard are just perfect (especially Gerard).

"Give him a kiss every now and then and he’ll come around.” The whore turned its face away, pressing it against his own shoulder in a feeble attempt to hide. <---This killed me. Gerard is so vulnerable but obviously...I don't even know. Not entirely vulnerable at the same time? (And I love the fact that you've made his character so complex).

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